Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you like children should be spend their free time?
Some people hold the opinion that children have plenty of spare time which must be utilized for their education purpose. I, however, believe that utilizing leisure time could be far beneficial for their entire education period. But, it could be number of possible ways to teach instead of deliberately force to children for study.
Numerous studies have consistently found by different countries that at the age of three years a child may easily learn approximately 3000 vocabulary which demonstrates the attribute of children. Furthermore, I have seen a many time that mostly parents provide different types of equipments and toys to play at spare time that actually enhance their brain quality which seems to be another way of learning such as, IQ games, laptops, tablets and many others that supports on their education as well. Further add, many adepts assert that according to the brain capacity of children 10 to 12 hours is quite enough for academic study. Along with this, a recent study by few countries shows that in many countries education criteria is quite strict hat could be the reason of anxiety at early age.
In addition, in order to make children’s life better parents and schools should provide qualitative education system no matter how much time spend in a day. For instance, in third world countries especially in slum areas people are getting quality of education that eventually impacts on their career as well as on higher education. At last, people should encourage their children to get engage with several activities in spare time that will be worthwhile for enhancing brain level.
To sum up, it is not mandatory children should be taught every time to get higher education or enforce by teachers to study every time. Hence, children should be encouraged with several activities that also plays most imperative role among their life.
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| 2019-10-02 | Muhammad Waleed Khan | 84 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...of children. Furthermore, I have seen a many time that mostly parents provide different t...
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Line 5, column 501, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...at supports on their education as well. Further add, many adepts assert that according ...
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Line 5, column 701, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...udy by few countries shows that in many countries education criteria is quite strict hat ...
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Line 13, column 253, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... most imperative role among their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, third, well, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15635179153 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.614245476 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589576547231 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.4475928904 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.916666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31478416863 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131543488499 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782653042288 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221181862447 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611549990813 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.