The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
Write at least 150 words.
IELTS Writing Task 1
The Diagram shows how sun’s energy is trapped by the greenhouse gases on earth. Overall, Most of the part of the radiation received from the sun goes back to the atmosphere either by being radiated back from land or by directly being reflected back.
Firstly, when the heat is produced by the sun, half of the part goes back directly in the environment and other half comes to the surface of earth. The part of heat radiated from the energy received by our planet is again distributed from which half goes directly back to the space and other half is trapped by the greenhouse gases.
Furthermore, Carbon Dioxide constitutes one important part in greenhouse gases which is being produced by a number of Sources, Vehicle such as trucks, cars and many more as shown in the picture play a crucial role for production of this gas, burning of fossil fuels by factories releases a large amount of it too.
Accompanied by cutting down of trees which are a useful source for absorbing Carbon Dioxide are also being cut off which has concluded to more Carbon gas present in the ecosystem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 171, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80526315789 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50504200705 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536842105263 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.4705938504 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.166666667 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6666666667 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147368567001 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984822442176 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106858915557 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864408177566 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613826419279 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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