You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport.
Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter
explain where you live
describe the problem
give reasons why you do not want this development
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Newspaper Editor,
my name is John employed in the multinational organisation as a software engineer, residing in Malir near to the local airport. However, The purpose of this letter to express my objection to the advancement of the airport plan. Accordingly, planned to double the number of flights and the more open airport would cause many problems for us.
Firstly, aircraft both for take-off or landing passes above our house incurs excessive disturbance and noise. Furthermore, especially at night, the number of incoming and outgoing flights increases with the passage of five minutes. Recently, my wife has given birth to a baby boy, mostly lacking while sleeping because of sounds coming out of the engine. Consequently, scared because of the noise and feel sick. Therefore, it is not a favourable plan for us and a residence living near to the airport. Expectedly, elaborated problems to stop further enlargements to the airport. In addition to this, please build a bigger airport far from the residential area.
Yours Faithfully,
John Moses
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 32.9175257732 30% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27058823529 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89340019802 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688235294118 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3245422714 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4545454545 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4545454545 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 4.34317383033 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192559927963 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677797718832 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497560581187 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926155680706 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698847470481 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 8.71597938144 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.