Food travels thousands of miles from producers to consumers. Some people think that it would be better for the environment and economy if people ate only the local food produce by farmers.
To what extend do you agree or disagree
Food is on a long trip from a farm in different country or city to our home. It not only consumes a huge financial resources but also can be harmful environmentally. In my point of view, supporting local products can be beneficial for our health and society.
From an economic point of view, using non-local foods means spending a lot of money for transportation, conservation and storage. While supporting farmers mean using pristine food which is not only affordable economically but also is useful in terms of nutrition because protection food for a long trip needs some chemicals which is not suitable for health. Secondly, supporting rural jobs like agriculture and animal husbandry can decrease the rate of immigration from village to city which impose high pressure to economic and structure of a country. Moreover, export of domestic products raise the economic level of society and make country independent from other governments.
From an environmental perspective, the reduction of cultivating rate is equal to increase the desertification which can affect the fauna and flora of an area. Plus, desertification can enhance the flood and sand storm risk. However, we should not forget the proper principles of agriculture which not only guarantee the quality of soil and final products but also protect the natural resources like water.
To wrap it up, consumption of local food products can decrease the distance between farm and home which is effective financially and environmentally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'resource'?
Suggestion: resource
.... It not only consumes a huge financial resources but also can be harmful environmentally...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34309623431 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12329013462 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564853556485 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9844603951 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.090909091 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136916409541 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554989536756 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040834070072 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854214308786 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426829938433 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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