The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
Given are two maps, one depicting the plan of a town centre known as Islip, and the other proposing some developments to it.
A brief analysis of the figures reveals that the cardinal change will be the construction of the road around the area. It is also interesting to note that the countryside will be replaced by some modern facilities, including the bus station, shopping centre, and areas only for walkers.
Looking at the map of the town as it is today, there is a main road from west to east, and a row of shops are on either side of the road. In a planned development, the main road will be supplanted by pedestrians site. Also, shops on the north side of the road will be replaced by different amenities, namely a bus station, shopping centre, car park, and a new housing area.
The traffic will be led to a dual carriageway, forming a ring around the centre of the town.
There is another residential area on the south side of the main road near shops and a park. The park size will be reduced in the future to making a new location for housing. Moreover, there will be no change in the situation of the school and housing area, which are located on the south side of the map.
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- The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit. 78
- Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective. 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42533936652 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50678733032 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506787330317 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3298482778 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128113272814 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060526042589 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640268490274 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904913604371 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691895502841 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.