How widely do you think the problem spreads that people spend too much time on work than their personal life and experience time shortage? What problems it cause?
In this burgeoning epoch of spending too much time in office, a contemporary human dwells in a world which is shaped by the latest trends and approaches coming across the globe points for years. The opponents and proponents have their perceptual intellection to support their ideas. Before deducing a fair conclusion, I am going to shed some light on both the aspects in the upcoming paragraphs.
According to the first school of thought, many people say that due to the lack of money, workers have to work for longer hours to earn their daily bread and sometimes people have to work on multiple jobs to earn money which in term led to less time for family. Apart from that, due to the ferocious competition and meeting deadlines, employees have to spend more time at the workplace to complete the work which can be very stressful for them. Additionally, office workers have to spend long hours sitting in one place which can lead to many problems like back pain, depression, stress on the body and the long term problems can be anything from heart problem to breathing problem.
According to the second school of thought, others believe that spending less time with the family often sours the relationships and can lead to divorce. Moreover, putting in more time at work can reduce the productivity of the workers as they also need the energy to work and without proper rest, they won't be able to stay active which can lead to poor performance at work. It is said “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”
To perorate, after having a lot of thoughts and deliberations with myself on this topic, I inclined to state that yes one should learn to manage time between their family and work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, moreover, second, so, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 31.9359605911 169% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76174496644 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51733550884 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56711409396 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.5024630542 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.6599225343 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.666666667 104.977214359 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1111111111 20.9669160288 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219170951323 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858896384117 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380387562343 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122745102011 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345945694015 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.3980295567 146% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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