You have recently visited a museum. Now write a letter to your friend about the museum you have visited.
Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write:
- where you went
- what you saw there
- how you felt about it
Dear Shima
I hope you and your family are well. I am writing to share my pleasant experience that I recently gain about my visiting of the stunning location.
Last week I decided to start studying concerning the history of my country, therefore I have visited an amazing Art museum, located in Tehran, Iran. This site was a perfect place for raising my awareness about the background of my nation.
The museum full of a wide variety of historical artefacts from prehistoric times that demonstrate Iranian origins. I had a chance to obvious artefacts and other objects of historical and cultural importance that is conserving in this museum.
In fact, this visiting provide a unique learning experience for me to take full advantage of this opportunity. As you know veritably learning history and observing these places such as museums and palaces is important for finding a sense of identity. Visiting this museum was a cultural experience for me. I cannot forget this memorable and attraction site.
I advise you to visit this museum as soon as possible.
Warm wishes,
Mans
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m as soon as possible. Warm wishes, Mans
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, therefore, well, in fact, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09444444444 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78033215886 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8632210049 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4166666667 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205098831534 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777491140939 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729447547666 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135994512304 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080084582818 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.