tpo 34 sea cows' extinctions
The material discusses the causes of Steller's sea cows' extinction. While the reading looks at the topic from one perspective, the listening challenges certain points outlined in the reading passage.
Firstly, the reading details specific points regarding this topic, namely the Siberian people overhunted sea cows. Next, a change happened in the ecosystem that affected the population of sea cows' main source of food. Finally, the European fur traders hunted the last sea cows.
Conversely, the lecture challenges the points one specific contradiction is, sea cows were massive and each one weighed 10 tons, so a couple of them were enough to feed Siberian people for a month. As a result, Siberian people did not need to hunt a lot of sea cows. In addition to that, the hypothetical decline of kelp due to ecosystem disturbances before 1768, supposed to cause a drop of other marine populations, such as whales; however, there are no indication of this. Therefore, kelp populations were stable, and sea cows did not have experience of food shortage. One final point, sea cows populations were quite small before the arrival of the European fur traders after 1741. The decline happened in 1700, so there was a serious change consider the main cause of sea cows' extinction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, while, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 22.412803532 22% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 1373.03311258 78% => OK
No of words: 210.0 270.72406181 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08095238095 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71189953593 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 145.348785872 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 419.366225166 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7203744466 49.2860985944 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 110.228320801 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.06452816374 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.487897534457 0.272083759551 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211289000506 0.0996497079465 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107813740333 0.0662205650399 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321685363022 0.162205337803 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113965422691 0.0443174109184 257% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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