Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
Some people argue that children should spend their time on education even when they are not at school or doing their homework since time is of essence and must be valued. However, I am totally opposed to this argument and in the following I am going to present my reasoning.
First of all, bombarding pupils with various scientific facts will only make them tired and frustrated. Everyone needs to relax and unwind once in a while and children are not an exception. If a kid is pushed hard to study all the time, he/she would break eventually under all that pressure. Entertainments and game can be seen as break time for our mind. They give our brain enough time to process and store the information it has received during the day. In addition, they can be used as prizes to persuade the kids to study so that they can be free again!
Secondly, Successful people besides having the knowledge possess certain social skills. They have experienced life not only through books and someone else's point of view, but also by their own. Youngster should be let out to see the world for themselves, and not be locked up in dull classes for all their teens' lives. By exploring their surroundings, they learn how to interact with other people and show compassion when required. No one like a nerd who is unable to start a simple conversation. Just because they have drowned themselves in their books while growing up and never bothered to talk to their peers, they lake the precious skill of communication. As a result, they cannot present their ideas and sell them to their audiences. Therefore, they often get ignored no matter how brilliant their ideas are.
In conclusion, although learning mathematics, physics and biology trains child's brain, it does not necessarily guarantee their success in the future. There are other essential skills like communication and sympathy which are not taught in any classroom. Hence, it is vital to let teens fool around with their friends to gain such experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87426900585 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58771269038 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62865497076 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1378106424 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6111111111 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14851950144 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443723883191 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449392199911 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904118430642 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419264840109 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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