Some people argue that experience is the best teacher. Life experiences can teach more effectively than books or formal school education. How far do you agree with this idea? Support your opinion with reasons and/or your personal experience.
Recently, the phenomenon of social experience and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the significance of complex procedure is highly beneficial such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and consequative positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that the educational system can be a plus and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a general standpoint, life experiences can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that crucial issues, as well as ultimate outcomes, are inextricably bound up. According to my own exprience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered current policies. Thus, the beneficial ramifications of both effective methods and beneficial methods apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of a public arena, formal school education might increase the consequences of critical needs. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of creative processes is correlated negatively with best teacher. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of learning system.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides. I profoundly believe that the benefits of experimental education far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantage of this unique phenomenon prove the significance of total outcomes, but also pinpoint the throny issues' potential of implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74358974359 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24224660546 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688034188034 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8016461751 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.25397266985 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169432017473 0.242375264174 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475041425189 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439285751216 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859456890692 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396187737867 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 53.1260098522 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 11.5310837438 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.12 8.32886699507 134% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 55.0591133005 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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