A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Education is always a hot-button topic of discussion. Government policies are made to provide required level of education to each and every student. I disagree with the claim, that a country should have same curriculum for all students before they enter college. Nation is divided in urban, sub-urban and rural areas, likewise the level of education provided to the student is divided based on region and economic conditions. For example, Most modern and western culture school teaches student usual subjects like mathematics, science, politics along with this foreign languages, extra curriculum activities, like dance, music, sports etc. This extra subjects or extra curriculum activities help students to understand their field of interest at early age and start developing their expertise in that field even before entering college.
To evoke interest in subjects, sometimes curriculum is need that establish connection of students with their native place. For instance, India is a country of diversity, many languages, cultures and religion. Every school teaches two languages one is English and other is native language (mostly mother tongue), so that students do not feel seperated from the culture and history of their origin. Thus, entire nation have different curriculum.
Their might be certain drawbacks of the same national curriculum on the economic and education growth of country. For instance, Some students might have inclination to pursue law after school, but due to same national curriculum, system focused more on science and maths and not on economics, politics and arts. Such students find it difficult to cope up with new subjects when they enter college. Thus, diversity of national eduation might also decline.
To contrast, having same national curriculum help all students level of education before entering college. For example: In india, some students are in state board schools and some students are in national board schools. The level of education provided in terms of common subjects like science, mathematics, politics etc. always various. Thus, when students from nation-wide school with different curriculum enter same college, some student find it hard to compete with their peers.
To conclude, above I wrote my view on diagreement about the recommendation of having same curriculum nation-wide and also specified certain circumstances when my diagreement might not stand might be weaken. In essence, some subjects of utmost importance and some extra curriculum activities for development of students before entering college should be made mandatory, that allows for the development of student for taking a informed decision while entering college.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 424, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, so, thus, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2297.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 410.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60243902439 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72822186178 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487804878049 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 721.8 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.354520027 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.85 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35 5.21951772744 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374252079225 0.243740707755 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12452496607 0.0831039109588 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106053956824 0.0758088955206 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23829789954 0.150359130593 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773786632826 0.0667264976115 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 48.8420337079 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 12.1743820225 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.1639044944 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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