Maths and philosophy are needed to make it as optional due to its difficulty level. Do you agree or disagree?
Even though many schools emphasise on teaching different disciplines in a curriculum, the subjects ,such as mathematics and philosophy have always been subject to the question that whether to make it optional.
Since schooling is meant for an overall development of the students , it seems illogical to make elective mathematics and philosophy from the syllabus and that is illustrated below.
Mathematics , nevertheless , is scary for many a person , the application of this subject is seen in everywhere even in a person's day-to-day life; thereby , this engenders the need to include it in the syllabus of education till secondary level. Making mandatory to learn arithmetic helps a student to imbibe knowledge in basic numerical calculation , where such information could cater to handle finance of an individual to , so that it equips him to even run financial institution. Besides acquiring numeracy skills , learning mathematics is also considered meeting the requirements of a people to be called as 'functionally literate', as it requires the skill of reading , writing and basic algebraic calculations. As such , the more students learn maths , the more it benefits in their future.
Furthermore , philosophy , though , are more inclined to encourage the young ones to assimilate better outlook of life , it mainly deals with rational capability ; whereas many people feel this as a Herculean task to learn by them. Students need time to understand the topic , although they are at their best age to learn up's and down's of life , while broad-based education enables the young ones to engage to absorb the essence of philosophy , which this could evolve them to scale new heights in their living standards. Considering philosophy as a non-obligatory topic neither improves standard of living nor absorbs better perception of life , and hence , if the authorities provided provision to discrete philosophy from their curriculum , it would not be beneficial for students in their near future.
Overall , ostensibly , philosophy as well as mathematics is inextricable from the day-to-day activities of students , because it not only helps to maintain finance but also aids to cope the changes of life. Finally , if the subjects had not learned compulsorily by the pupils , it would not have been advantageous for student's lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, hence, if, look, nevertheless, second, so, well, whereas, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43732590529 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1187103831 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571030640669 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 2.10420841683 475% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.1322932007 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 177.454545455 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6363636364 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0739929850512 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0286900154757 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0255884663948 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0475873140999 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016879999254 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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