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With the accelerating development of our society, arts and athletics have been playing two important roles in our daily life. it's hard to judge which has more significance. while some people are advocators for that governments should spend more fund in support of the arts, there're also many people believe athletics worth more attention and investment. From my perspective, I disagree that the governments spend more money on supporting arts.
first, supporting the athletics can provide more chances and better environments for the athletes. government has influence to the public. when government indicate that they would like to put more money on supporting athletics, that also means they support that citizens pay more energy and income on sports. sports means more than arts to some degree, and the activities can involve almost all kinds of people even handicaps. For instance，if the government would like to cultivate athletics such as sportsmen from olympic teams, the influence of a gold medalist is huge. children would arouse their interest in sports for the athletes have set a good example. Sportsmanship could be a good teacher for teenagers, they need somebody to tell them when facing the difficulties and sufferings, they should overcome them with their diligence, perseverance and strong belief. only if the sports are paid attention by nation and citizens，the country would develop better with their strong and healthy people.
let's talk about why we don't spend more fund on the arts. As I have mentioned, sports are highly educational, while arts are not so appropriate to education. it's known that arts are somehow obscure and pluralistic. An art work may contain different and several meanings，and some reflect the dark side in the society, which is too early for the children to know, and teenagers without right directions would imitate some of the actions.
also, there's a saying that‘artists are inspired by the suffering.' vincent van Gogh was a best example. he lived cleanly and poorly，with no money, no women ,or applause. while Auguste Rodin was hiring beautiful naked models dancing in the studio, vincent has no money to hire models, so he can only paint towards the mirror again and again, lone and bitter artists can figure their spirit on the paper, in their work，we read more than beauty，but a thought，an attitude , an era. Roman Rolland has said ‘Poverty is not only a mentor of the mind, but also a tutor of style. it makes spirit and mental to be indifferent towards fame and fortune.'
To maximize the profit, government will tend to invest the money on a more profitable project. if we invest the same money on an art exhibition and a sports competition, that would be very easy to tell that the sports competition will appeal more audience and attract more attention. sports will become a culture if we treated it seriously, like olympics, which symbols freedom and equality. And if a country, unfortunately was involved in a war, the museum and artworks are very likely to be destroyed, these masterpieces almost are the entire worth of the arts, but sports don't. like olympics, it was suspended during World War，but a year after that, olympics returned.
Finally, the relation between artists and athletes are interactive. athletes represent the national physical strength, artists represent the national mental strength. Neither of them are unimportant. but as for a country, we need our people physically strong first, we hope to let the athletes be our good examples, when we see our athletes fight against the rivals, we feel uniform, a kind of national cohesion.
In conclusion, governments should spend more money in support of the athletics, such as state-sponsored olympic teams and so on. And athletics field can perform better than now if we pay more attention to it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, so, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 32.0 13.8261648746 231% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3251.0 1977.66487455 164% => OK
No of words: 627.0 407.700716846 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18500797448 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.00399520894 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85589205269 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 313.0 212.727598566 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.499202551834 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 986.4 618.680645161 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3480481673 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5151515152 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0303030303 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 31.0 5.5376344086 560% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198780010548 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565998946276 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773725713422 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113751676899 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849218554421 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 86.8835125448 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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