some people think that in the morden society individuals are becoming more dependent on each other. while other say that individuals are becoming more independent of each other. discuss both views and give your opinion.
In current scenario, dependency is burgeoning day by day on technology and each other. Some folks urge that mankind, now-a-days, are becoming more dependent on each other. However, it is well reckoned by others that they become more independent on other populace. Nevertheless, in my opinion, human beings become dependent on others for their every work.
On the side of the coin, humans perform their activity by their own. Therefore, some said that they become independent. firstly, because of new gizmos, people work easily and freely without any obstacles. As a result, one can perform their activity in faster and smarter way. To quote an example, person can withdraw money from automated machine instead of standing in long quae and devoid of any kind of exertion which can be considered as a paragon. Secondly, plethora of people opt to work by self rather than giving task to others for their conveniency. To cite an example, employees of industry choose to work by self for their comfortness and also after doing this they can update self for their work also.
On the other side of the coin, due to sedentary lifestyle, mankind, in recent era, become couch potato. Initially they are becoming lazy and careless day-by-day because of advance technology. hence, they always try to give their task to others. To be more specific, youngsters always give order to the children or small one from them for their work. Moreover, in some organization generation-X think that they assign their work to the generation-Y. henceforth, they are delaying to perform their work. To illustrate, in hospital old age staff always wait for other staff or junior staff member who perform their activities that stands as a paragon.
To conclude, with the help of ultra modern technology, people becoming more active. Nonetheless, it has some ripple effects hence, they become more and more dependent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, kind of, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11897106109 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65354172612 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543408360129 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.76152304609 294% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9814008449 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.55 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.65 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 3.4128256513 410% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27354445465 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102604859058 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106394868685 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218747712939 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151856715886 0.056905535591 267% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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