The effectiveness of a country's leaders is best measured by examining the well-being of that country's citizens.
Most of us think that a country is well known to the world for its land and natural resources. But, This alone cannot be the deciding factor to consider a country is best. The wealth of the country lies in hands of the leader. A leader has the responsiblity to fulfill the needs of a citizen. <span class="hiddenSuggestion" pre=""></span>The most important of all is that a citizen should feel proud to live in his country. So,how good a citizen feels about his nation shows how effective a leader is.
To start with, the population of a country consists of different types of citizens including youngsters, aged persons, children and so on. And if the leader is capable to take care of every single citizen then the entire country is known for its prosperity. Therefore, by determining the well being of country's citizens the intelligence of a leader can be judged correctly. Moreover, A strong economy of a country is brought by both leader and citizens of a country. A leader has to focus on various categories of people and their economical status. Because, the economical status of citizens varies as poor, middle classed, high classed people. A leader has to understand these people's varied requirements. Accordingly, He has to serve for the well being of all the citizens of the nation. Duty of a leader is to satisfy the people of entire nation.
In addition, every citizen must be given equal importance without any discrimination for Good Education, more employment opportunities, development in business and trade and whatever necessary to survive. citizens praise their Leader when they are given everything and enjoy living in the country. Furthermore, There should be unity among people without any conflicts between two states or two groups.Making good decisions by a leader in difficult situations helps to maintain peace in the nation. A peaceful environment in a country makes the citizens to feel safe and secure to live their life. This clearly portrays the role played by the leader in the well being of country's citizens.
To conclude, I strongly believe that a best method to decide how effective the leader rules the nation is to determine the well being of citizens. Though, A leader don't directly involve with the people but He is the one who is behind the goodness of every family in a country. Thus, A leader is for the people and it is best to judge a leaders ability by taking the citizens position in account.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, as to, in addition, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 415.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9734939759 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28543060944 2.79657885939 117% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496385542169 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7431736122 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7391304348 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0434782609 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82608695652 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290543363987 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104791083786 0.0831039109588 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843563967651 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199200699056 0.150359130593 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166707502654 0.0667264976115 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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