the graph below shows UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tones, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007.
A glance at the provided graph reveals information about the acid rain emitted by four sectors in UK from 1990 to 2007
It is obvious that acid rain emissions from these fields decreased from the begin to the end of period shown except the figure for other industries which followed a volatile pattern. Moreover, the amount of acid rain from domestic field was always kept at the minimum level out of four sectors.
In 1990, the acid rain emitted from electrical, gas and water suppliers ranked first, at over 3 million tones following by vehicle, domestic and other industries with over 2 million, 0.7 million and 0.6 million, respectively. From 1990 to 1999, the data for electricity, gas and water supply decreased suddenly to exactly 1 million which is dwarfed by the one of transport and communication sector with nearly 1.5 million. Meanwhile, the figure for other industries remained at the same level.
At the end of period, the figures for electrical, gas and water suppliers, vehicle and domestic sectors also reached their peaks at 1.25, 0.5 and 0.2 million, respectively. However, the amount of acid rain emitted from other countries still remained at the same level after reaching its peak at exactly 1 million tones in 2005.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ssions from these fields decreased from the begin to the end of period shown except the f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, moreover, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59743558104 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.6003410988 43.030603864 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.571428571 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7142857143 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273475425847 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13578080296 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091185047144 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209878044298 0.15604864568 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101946151064 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.