The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
A glance at the provided bar chart reveals the number of money on spending 6 different items in Europe including Germany, Italy, France, and Britain.
It is obvious that British people spent more money than people in other countries on all six goods. Moreover, the money spent on photographic film is highest in out of six items.
Most of money was spent on photographic film in Britain, at nearly 170 thousand pounds, following by that on toys and CDs in Britain with 165 and over 160 thousand pounds, respectively. In addition, Germany is the country which spends smallest money in out of 4 countries with nearly 140000 pounds for all items.
The figures for Italy and France lie on these two extremes, and the Italian spent more money than French in almost items. In France, the most money spent on photographic film, at over 160,000 pounds, by contrast, the figure for tennis is lowest, around 145000 pounds, which also is the minimum figure shown on the chart. In Italy, the money spent on all items shares the compatible figures with over 150 thousand pounds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'spends the smallest'.
Suggestion: spends the smallest
... addition, Germany is the country which spends smallest money in out of 4 countries with nearly...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84239130435 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41582658736 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527173913043 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8510900102 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.375 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0900249190421 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481704521474 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239993774653 0.0843802449381 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0580646161798 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293527487137 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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