Some people think instead of preventing climate change, we should find ways to live with it. To what extent do you agree/disagree?
With the continuous development of the world, opinions have diverged on the issue of climate change prevention. Notwithstanding, the idea of living with it is entirely against my belief.
It is undeniable that climate change has been the root of several catastrophes on a global scale so people should not surrender the battle against it. Globally citizens have been facing an increase in the number of climate disasters such as floods, drought or hurricanes every year. Consequently, governments should take action by enforcing strict environmental laws in order to prevent this situation. To exemplify, there should have a limit on the usage of vehicles of enterprises and individuals to reduce the amount of fossil fuels as well as the amount of greenhouse gas emissions, which can effectively postpone the process of global warming.
However, there are bound to be those who doubt this idea as they believe that the impacts of climate change have become enormous that people have to admit the undesired social reality. The environmental problems are mainly found in underdeveloped countries, in which industrial and agricultural developments are prioritized. With weak financial conditions, they have to excessively exploit the natural resources and accept the degenerated living surroundings in order to boost economic growth. Nonetheless, there comes a time when these nations realize that what they are doing just makes the situation worse by creating more environmental issues and rising the level of climate change. Therefore, countries worldwide should join forces and make the concerted effort to abet one another storing the environment.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that governments around the world should take measures to tackle the issue of climate change for the sake of the later generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50709219858 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02543582123 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613475177305 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.729446001 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.416666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170666379163 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589780118644 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349017141677 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096995821192 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225556538192 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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