Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunize their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children?
Due to recent advent of vaccines, there are those who hold the belief that it is necessary for immunization to become a compulsory medical treatment for children. On the contrary, others strongly consider vaccines as optional remedies to deal with health problems.
In regard of the immunization for children, it cannot be denied that this measurement sometimes unintentionally causes serious damage to children. In detail, vaccines are often injected into offsprings who possess a weak immune system. Thus, just a simple side-effect can become significantly harmful to them. They might have to suffer from not only dreadful complications but also even mortality. Moreover, financial obstacles are also other unavoidable concerns. More exactly, not all parents are capable of affording the vaccine fee. Therefore, they actually have the right to know about these adverse effects and prices of vaccines before deciding to vaccinate their children or not.
On the other hand, compulsory immunization is undeniable to assist in protecting children from dreaded factors that threaten their well-being. In clarification, it is said that prevention is better than cure. Vaccines are proved to be able to eradicate a cascade of health problems by prevent them from widely spreading in the society. Hence, the mortality rate will be significantly diminished and this leads to an enhancement in our living standard.
In conclusion, despite the considerable common benefits of mandatory vaccination, there are still some sporadic adverse incidents caused by this medical treatment. From my perspective, I highly appreciate the right of parents in electing their own methods to optimally ensure their children's health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[14]
Message: Did you mean 'side effect' (=adverse effect, unintended consequence)? Open compounds are not hyphenated.
Suggestion: side effect
...weak immune system. Thus, just a simple side-effect can become significantly harmful to the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63846153846 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03830330649 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665384615385 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8112370108 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240930382553 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675605956103 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591543437932 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13594897949 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356145525209 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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