Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it could cause
problems. Do you agree or disagree?
people these days often start working at the age of 15 and continue till whatever age they like. Some retire early , others do not . In general , people work to earn a living so that they can suffice their own needs and take care of their families.
it is often seen as a general trend that the average retirement age is around 60 years. This again depends on region to region and also on the nature of occupation a person pursues . Ideally in the service industry people working over the age of 60 are often seen with questionable eyes , because its difficult to decide whether the guy is an asset or a liability to the company . For example , in a recent case of TCS , the company is following a new strategy of hiring and firing wherein it is replacing it's senior most employees with large number of fresher hires because, according to them it increases their profits and provides them with a cheaper and a reliable workforce.
In my opinion , even though senior employees can prove to be highly beneficial to an organization because of obvious reasons such as having a higher degree of knowledge and wise experience , they should give the young bloods a chance and see them as potential replacement candidates. if we think from a management perspective , there is a greater chance of work ( physical or mental ) to take toll on the health of someone above their sixties when compared to a person in his twenties. Moreover , a younger hire is more reliable as he is bound by his urge to grow and work harder to conquer his future endeavours . An economy driven by youngsters can flourish better if not driven by the elderly.
To conclude , one should respect somebody working overage but the same person should also have a sense of understanding that the baton now needs to be passed over into responsible young hands
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for example, in general, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71698113208 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58620428536 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59748427673 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.3718393946 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153407709955 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599027114849 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622908884577 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931580018571 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813074647585 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.