Recently you went to a local restaurant with your family and you were very satisfied with their food and service. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper to tell him/her about it.
Describe the meal you and your family members had and let the editor know
why you think the restaurant is worth visiting.
Hello Sir and Madam,
I am writing to you with regard my last visit at the local restaurant in the town center.
I have been resident of the Rockdale city, since 1956. I have been to the most of the pub and restaurants around the city.
Previous weekend me and my family decided to go to the new place opened at the World Square. It has very mysterious name Snak&Hack. The place is beautiful by itself, the walls are painted in non regular structures in many various colors. But that was not the best thing which we have experienced inside, the food was delicious. The eyes were bigger than belly. Moreover, the staff was really helpful in choosing dishes. I would recomend this place to everybody, especially for the people which love asian cuisine. we had a pork belly in sweet and soure soy sos
regards,
Tomasz Zawadzki
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 56, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ident of the Rockdale city, since 1956. I have been to the most of the pub and re...
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Line 13, column 516, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...or the people which love asian cuisine. we had a pork belly in sweet and soure soy...
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Line 13, column 562, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a pork belly in sweet and soure soy sos regards, Tomasz Zawadzki
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 708.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78378378378 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38060399552 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.72972972973 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0885333096 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.3636363636 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4545454545 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118685212508 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344082929557 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535343607728 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721116353471 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889083522803 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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