More and more people go on traveling and touring today. What are its advantages and disadvantages? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Traveling has witnessed an upward trail in recent times. I can say that the tourism industry is attracting a lot more travelers every year. This essay delves into the reasons behind increasing travelers and outweighs the benefits of traveling.
Tourism is a popular leisure activity. Tourists can relax, have fun, recharge their batteries, experience different customs and cultures visiting historical monuments, tasting new cuisines. Travel broaden our horizon.
The tourism industry is vital for some countries. People rely on tourism for their income. Tourism attracts investments from governments and companies. It creates employment due to the demand for goods and services. It helps to improve the standard of living. Low-cost airlines, construction of airports even in small cities has led people to have access even from remote areas. More affordable hotels, advanced technology for online bookings, availability of internet has become far simpler. Better opportunity in other countries raised the migration of students.
Tourism can harm the environment. Excessive buildings destroys natural habitats and spoils the landscape. It puts pressure on local resources available such as food, water. Tourism may cause a rise in the cost of living. Local traditions and job skills may be lost.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, of course, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41886792453 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0254073264 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660377358491 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.1744536926 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.555555556 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4444444444 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0472149261789 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0191781618219 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0218298733226 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0240436693208 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232090503481 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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