Technology
Nowadays, with advanced technology, people interact with each other has become a positive development. These has three reasons includes adding friends easier, following all of your friend everywhere, face time with everybody to improve speaking skills. First and foremost, you can connect to internet and access a lot of social network such as Facebook, Zalo, Skype,.... you can find many friends on the world and talk with them about your hobbies,...Besides, you can follow all of your friends everywhere by social network, you can move and follow your friends with your smart phone. The last, although your friends stay everywhere or far, you can call them by face time on phone everyday. I can see their face and I fell very happy about that. In conclusion, Technology development bring a lot of comfortable relationships of people. It makes people became friendly.
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| 2024-11-11 | vuhongminh | 61 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 366, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...al network such as Facebook, Zalo, Skype,.... you can find many friends on the wor...
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Line 1, column 448, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ld and talk with them about your hobbies,...Besides, you can follow all of your fr...
^^
Line 1, column 452, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Besides
...nd talk with them about your hobbies,...Besides, you can follow all of your friends eve...
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Line 1, column 682, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...you can call them by face time on phone everyday. I can see their face and I fell very h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 13.1623246493 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 728.0 1615.20841683 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 141.0 315.596192385 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16312056738 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 4.20363070211 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88459865683 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 176.041082164 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652482269504 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 506.74238477 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.3018582366 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0429441308992 0.244688304435 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032462249155 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085887038262 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0429441308992 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.