Topic: To what extent has information technology reduced social inequality? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Recent decades have witnessed the popularity of information technology (IT), some people believe that it can reduce social inequality. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons why I think that I can be one of the factors to decrease social inequality.
First of all, IT can enhance the capacity of students in many remote areas because IT staff may create numerous applications. Indeed, due to the distance limitation, hard copies of documents cannot delivered to remote places, which leads to the number of people who cannot read being quite high. Therefore, thanks to the development of IT, remote residents can easily access huge knowledge resources: for example, videos, soft-copy documents, Internet.
Furthermore, IT can help residents enhance their financial status. Indubitably, due to the widespread of e-commercials, a lot of people can sell their home-grown products on the websites to final consumers without any spending for middle sellers. Consequently, they can earn enough money to cover their basic needs. For example, Sùng Bầu, a woman in the North of Vietnam was born into a poverty family but she can sell numerous “ miến dong” which is local products to other people, even in the south of Vietnam. So not only her financial situation is enhanced but also the people around her.
In conclusion, I think that information technology (IT) can reduce social inequality because it helps remote people approach a huge knowledge resource via applications and numerous people who live in remote places can make money for a living through the websites.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, may, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24110671937 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81968649718 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612648221344 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5589852774 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.545454545 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 44.0 5.01903807615 877% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103906366297 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387634925597 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462175841136 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763528743298 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482281840526 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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