You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram below shows how tomato ketchup is made.
Write at least 150 words.
The picture illustrates the process of tomato ketchup manufacture and preparation for sale on the market.
It is clear that there are 15 stages in the production of tomato. The process begins with the picking of tomatoes and end at the sour in some meals.
Looking at the tomato ketchup production process in detail, tomatoes must first be picked in the fields and put carefully in basket. these tomatoes are then sorted, sent to factory and removed part of ones before being put in a container, which crushed the tomatoes into container.
At the 7 stage in the process, the ground tomatoes is mixed with sugar, salt and vinegar and the resulting mixture is boiled. Next the mixture is leaved for 2 hours, and then put once into ketchup. After that labelling, they sent to quality control.
Finally, these ketchup are packed into boxes for delivery to shop and used with some food in meals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 134, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...the fields and put carefully in basket. these tomatoes are then sorted, sent to fact...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 157, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fully in basket. these tomatoes are then sorted, sent to factory and removed part...
^^
Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elling, they sent to quality control. Finally, these ketchup are packed into b...
^^^^^
Line 21, column 10, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this ketchup' or 'these ketchups'?
Suggestion: this ketchup; these ketchups
...ent to quality control. Finally, these ketchup are packed into boxes for delivery to s...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91612903226 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38958893447 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3014021695 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6666666667 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124676573506 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559539515975 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315076942254 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725699102908 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252028564045 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.