Write a letter to the manager of your local bus service. They have recently made some changes to the bus services which created inconveniences for you. In your letter, explain:
Q) What are the changes?
Q) What are the problems you are facing?
Q) what part of the service would you like to change?
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to bring your attention to the changes in the local bus services which created discomfort for the people and request you to make us comfortable.
Introducing myself, I am residing in Porwal street for five years and I have been using your bus services to reach office daily. Recently, I have noticed a few service changes, especially the timings of the buses. The buses I have been traveling are regular on-time till a few days back. However, I have observed that the timings are changed from office hours 9:00 A.M to 9:30 A.M and I could not reach the office at the specified time. Even the number of buses to the Kothrud area also reduced. I do not have a bike and even cannot afford it.
Hence, relying on your bus services. Also, the bus stop has been changed and it is a congested area and people feel difficulty to board the buses. Kindly see that every change made is feasible to the public.
Finally, I would suggest you provide a convenient place with less traffic to board the buses to avoid accidents. Apart from this, kindly increase the number of buses in our area to be feasible to reach the destinations early.
Yours Faithfully
George Thomas
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... Hence, relying on your bus services. also the bus stop has been changed and it is...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: also,
... Hence, relying on your bus services. also the bus stop has been changed and it is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47917681072 2.54303337028 137% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623529411765 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1824188565 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253055806964 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929496027592 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886266171981 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205504674537 0.12726935374 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101963991324 0.0580467560999 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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