In town and cities, the large shopping mall should replace the small shop. Do you agree or disagree?
The importance of shopping mall in cities and towns which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that we do shopping under one roof. Consequently, we are under the CCTV camera. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that we do discount on our shopping. Needless, to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some more merits but the one of the crucial effects is that we should get discount on heavy shopping. Besides, we can purchase branded clothes in shopping malls. Hence, it is apparently, why many people are against of this trend. B
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of shopping in cities and town are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, but, consequently, hence, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98591549296 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71142917633 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596244131455 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.479305436 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125599842401 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425455027008 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488969499555 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821656879529 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172128615067 0.0609392437508 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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