You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost.
You have still heard nothing from the airline company.
Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing today to intimate you regarding the suitcase that I had lost during my transit from Manchester to london at the airport last week.
I was travelling back to my hometown post my meeting on the last Wednesday by flight number AI420, I had deposited my baggage during the check in but didn't find the same in london. The suitcase contains some of my clothes, toiletries and a few important notes and documents that I had taken from the meeting. These documents are of utmost importance to me and I would need them before the month end, failing which my work would be hampered. The suit case is made of black leather, bearing the initials of my name A.B. in golden letters near the number lock, on the top of the bag.
As a remedy, and as I really need the documents, I am hoping that you would be more than kind to keep the suitcase in your custody once you have found it. Also, would request you to inform me regarding the whereabouts once found so as to avoid any delay, will get it collected personally. I'm attaching a copy of the boarding pass and a picture of the bag for your ready reference.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours truly,
Abhishek Berry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 151, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ited my baggage during the check in but didnt find the same in london. The suitcase c...
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Line 13, column 230, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...me regarding the whereabouts once found so as to avoid any delay, will get it collected ...
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Line 13, column 290, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...elay, will get it collected personally. Im attaching a copy of the boarding pass a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, really, regarding, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55909090909 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47587950814 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622727272727 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.3258552891 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.3 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186011575898 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748004673486 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054506512266 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123874210105 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034471729549 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.