You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost.You have still heard nothing from the airline company.Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about

Dear sir
I am Parminder Singh .Last week I went from Kuwait to Delhi by your Kuwait airline flight number is ak308 . My departure time was 10.00 pm last Sunday .That day I went to airport and everything had finished good I put my luggage and took boarding pass and go ahead that time I have a one hand bag which I carry my self .
When I enter in the plane and took my seat and put my hand upper side . Unfortunately,I had slept after 4 hour when the plane reached to Delhi then I forgotten my hand bag in the plane.suddenly,I had gone.
I want to tell you about my bag.my bag is a red colour and front side have a big sticker.upper right side I have wrote my name as well.inside the bag I have my cloths and some my documents.Those documents are very important for me.
I would like to request you if your staff has found my hand bag please inform me immediately,I will send you my address as well so when you find out then send me my hand bag on my home address.I am waiting for hear something good from you.
Yours sincerely
Parminder Singh

Votes
Average: 7 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir I am Parminder Singh .Last week I went f...
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Suggestion: .
Dear sir I am Parminder Singh .Last week I went from Kuwait to Delhi by...
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Suggestion: Last
Dear sir I am Parminder Singh .Last week I went from Kuwait to Delhi by you...
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Line 2, column 111, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ur Kuwait airline flight number is ak308 . My departure time was 10.00 pm last Sun...
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Line 2, column 156, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... departure time was 10.00 pm last Sunday .That day I went to airport and everythin...
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...eparture time was 10.00 pm last Sunday .That day I went to airport and everything ha...
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Line 2, column 324, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ave a one hand bag which I carry my self . When I enter in the plane and took my ...
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Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
... took my seat and put my hand upper side . Unfortunately,I had slept after 4 hour ...
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Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...d put my hand upper side . Unfortunately,I had slept after 4 hour when the plane r...
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Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
...ide . Unfortunately,I had slept after 4 hour when the plane reached to Delhi then I ...
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Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...gotten my hand bag in the plane.suddenly,I had gone. I want to tell you about my ...
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Line 4, column 114, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'written'.
Suggestion: written
...e a big sticker.upper right side I have wrote my name as well.inside the bag I have m...
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Line 4, column 189, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Those
... I have my cloths and some my documents.Those documents are very important for me. I...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...my hand bag please inform me immediately,I will send you my address as well so whe...
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Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... send me my hand bag on my home address.I am waiting for hear something good from...
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Line 6, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...omething good from you. Yours sincerely Parminder Singh
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Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you. Yours sincerely Parminder Singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22885572139 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58771533696 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606965174129 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.8950285808 44.8134815571 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.428571429 76.5299724578 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7142857143 16.8248392259 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13604909331 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070553458003 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03715178506 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839986450038 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367124710829 0.0580467560999 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.85 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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