You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• explain why you changed jobs
• describe your new job
• tell him/her your other news
Dear Nazlı,
I hope you and your family are fine. I am sorry I haven’t written for three months. I have been so busy over these quarter. I am writing to let you know that I have resigned from my previous company and took a new job recently.
As you know, I was responsible to measure credit risk of XY Bank whose market share is very small in banking sector. I had been stuck in the same position for a long and was not getting many chances to further my career. In addition, my office was shifted from European side to Anatolian side in İstanbul. It took approximately 2 hours to go to the office from my home whose location is at European side.
These reasons were forced to me to change my job and I find my new responsibilities in AB Bank which is the largest bank in Turkey. I am working to measure not only credit risk but also operational and market risk. Thus, I have more business opportunities thanks to focusing on more issues.
In other respects, my new company provided me a nice payment. The new office is so closed to my home. I will never need to catch the traffic jam. It has better office environment and friendly environment.
By the way, I am going to organize party to celebrate new job on this Saturday at my home. It would be great if you have time to join in.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Warm wishes,
Başak
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... haven't written for three months. I have been so busy over these quarter. I...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...I have been so busy over these quarter. I am writing to let you know that I have ...
^
Line 9, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er need to catch the traffic jam. It has better office environment and friendly e...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, thus, in addition, you know, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 254.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41338582677 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57302064525 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594488188976 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.13402061856 186% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9867930301 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.0 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3684210526 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36842105263 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171565945582 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511575017589 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513378469864 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984309311497 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536803389169 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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