Should parents be held legally responsible for the actions of their children? Do you agree
with this opinion? Support your position with your own study, experience or observations.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in people thought that parents should be held legally responsible for the action of their children. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one’s life. However I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There a number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that parents are the first teacher of their children, and they teach them to learn all about the society and they cannot contribute to manners but also numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say all these merits stand in one good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, when one follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility, dedication, perseverance. Hence, It is apparent why my observations say that parents are legally responsible for their children’s action.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of parents’ behavior toward their children are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 277, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... myriad of concerns in one's life. However I do not entirely accept this and I wil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10505836576 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92359569196 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591439688716 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3291665039 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.272727273 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200704169454 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796920013518 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870189684515 0.071462118173 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128464372936 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663583740684 0.0609392437508 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 77.0 Out of 90
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