Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Nowadays, fruits and vegetables have been transferred by planes to differrent nations, which cannot be implanted in all seasons. It is often argued that exporting fruit and vegetables between countries have both advantages and disadvantages. This essay shows the positive and negative sides of food crops which have been exported by air.
On the positive side, transporting goods such as fruit and vegetables by aeroplanes between countries, not only does give us the choice to eat a variety of fruits and vegetables from different cultures but also allows us to eat all types of crops any time of the year. For instance, about 10 years ago, in Egypt we could only eat Watermelon during few months from June to August, but now it is available in markets at any season of the year. Moreover, we can eat Indian and tropical fruits which were not available before in Egypt.
On the negative side, importing fruits and vegetables over a long distance by air from far away countries requires using chemical material by exporting companies to keep it fresh for a long time. In addition to that, it increases the taxes on goods. consequently, the prices of these items become higher. In 2017, research from the World Health Organization showed that the chemical material which have been used on crops during transporting causes dangerous diseases such as cancer.
In conclusion, in this day and age, transporting fruits and vegetables by air has increased and it has a positive side which gives us the ability to eat many types of them which comes from different countries and during any season. However, it has its drawbacks which can really harm our health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, really, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97841726619 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68142728313 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55035971223 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.6708635449 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250452684915 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090865059414 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722738927074 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159959475771 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053172714235 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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