Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Nowadays, fruit and vegetables used to be transferred by planes to nations, which they cannot be implanted or are out of season. It is often argued that export fruit and vegetables between countries have both advantages and disadvantages. This essay shows the positives and negatives sides of food crops which has been exported by air.
On the positive side, transporting goods such as fruit and vegetables by aeroplanes between countries, not only does give us the choice to eat a variety of fruits and vegetables from a different culture but also we can eat all types of crops any time of the year. For instance, about 10 years ago, in Egypt we could eat Watermelon at a few months only from June to July, but now we can find it in markets at any time of the year. Moreover, we can eat Indian fruits which are not available before in Egypt.
On the negative side, importing fruits and vegetables over a long distance by air from far countries lead to put some chemical material by exporting company to keep it fresh for a long time. In addition to that, it increases the taxes on goods; consequently, the prices of these items become high. In 2017, research from the World Health Organization showed that the chemical material was been put on crops during transporting it causes dangerous diseases such as cancer.
In conclusion, in this days and age, transporting fruits and vegetables by air has increased and it has a positive side which gives us the choice to eat many types of them which comes from different nations. but we should take care of its drawbacks which may affect our health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72857142857 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64463260826 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564285714286 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.241588617 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.363636364 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266678241103 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105654437026 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100096272194 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177667404535 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133748416521 0.056905535591 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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