Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is positive or negative development?
Nowadays, most people countries over the world purchase the same product; because of the global spread. I believe that this globalization has a double-edge.
It is unquestionable that there are several benefits to global products. The first one is people can use equal conditions all over the world. This phenomenon conjures to progress in society. They could use new technology to improve their lifestyle. For instance, most people even in remote areas access a cell phone that could be used in an emergency. In addition, this trend has an undeniable effect on mass-produced for some famous brand, bring them economic progress on a global scale.
On the other hand, this issue causes some cultural and local businesses problem for each country. A good illustration of this Saree, Indian traditional clothes with a majority of women used to wear. Consumerism and easy access to Western clothing and products prevalence, resulting in the type of clothing Indian women select to wear. Although, this inclination has an effect on industry handicraft every region, I believe that this item showing the identity and culture of every nation.Status quo causing demolition in local trades. In the above example, we can observe, it is not only affecting shutting down many stores and productions but also result in the unemployment rate.
In conclusion, using existing popular products is an unavoidable problem. In my way of thinking, this trend is had strengths and weaknesses in culture, lifestyle, and economy. However, the government would find a beneficial solution to handle negative effects.
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Suggestion: businesses'; business's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39224137931 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90929756754 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659482758621 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1730270269 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.1875 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133183474827 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431697975925 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521571201807 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963181062309 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06519337415 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.39 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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