You want to sell your bicycle. Your friend has told you that his cousin might like to buy it from you.
Write a letter to your friend’s cousin. In your letter
Explain why you are selling the bicycle
Describe the bicycle and how much it will cost
suggest a date when your friend’s cousin can come and see the bicycle
Dear Matt,
First of all thanks for expressing your interest in buying my bicycle. I am writing in reference to provide some key information regarding my bicycle so that it can help you in making your buying decision.
To start with the major reason of selling my bicycle is that I am going to purchase a new bike next month as I have to travel long distances due to work. The bicycle is a Baldwin make, black in color and was purchased from the company showroom in 2008. Additionally bicycle has a luggage carrier fixed on the back which will be handy for carrying your personal belonging as well as daily groceries. Since the bike is only a year old and has been well maintained so I am selling it at 200$.
If you would like to have a look at the condition of the bicycle you can come on Saturday at 5 pm.
Yours thankfully
Ned
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 186, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: black
...to work. The bicycle is a Baldwin make, black in color and was purchased from the company show...
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Line 7, column 254, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...ased from the company showroom in 2008. Additionally bicycle has a luggage carrier fixed on ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 485, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$200'.
Suggestion: $200
...n well maintained so I am selling it at 200$. If you would like to have a look...
^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ained so I am selling it at 200$. If you would like to have a look at the co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, regarding, so, well, as well as, first of all, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 694.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42038216561 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46861101152 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649681528662 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3777776798 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.75 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 4.34317383033 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264650844695 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109820975273 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596289442505 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168633477949 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465664723496 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.