Write a letter to a supermarket and complain about an accident which happened then, give some suggestions as well
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in regards to complain about an accident which happened in the supermarket and to offer valuable suggestions on how to avoid such incidents. Let me explain the situation.
To elucidate I am a local resident and a regular shopper at your supermarket though I have had a great shopping experience in the past last week while I was shopping at the supermarket in the crockery section I slipped and it nearly fractured my knee. Later on, after a detailed investigation, it was found by the customer service team that the floor was not mopped properly. This is not the first time this incident has happened last month while I was shopping at the store I saw an elderly gentleman injure himself in the vegetable and fruit section in the same manner.
These incidents are getting quite repetitive and are solely due to gross negligence of your support staff who do not perform their duties properly and thus the reputation of your store is getting affected. In my opinion I would request you to ask your staff to put some signboard in case the floor is slippery or if it has not been mopped properly additionally I would also request you to inquire into this matter and take suitable action immediately so that it can reduce the complaints by your customers and also enhance the consumer experience.
I look forward to your immediate action in this matter.
Yours sincerely
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in regards to complain about an accident which happen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77235772358 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6942726347 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60162601626 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 290.88556701 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.913907022 44.8134815571 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 130.444444444 76.5299724578 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 16.8248392259 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152161347923 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602807014765 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128720529548 0.0603063233224 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116938561687 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162316896986 0.0580467560999 280% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 8.37731958763 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.