Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age, for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
How to increase the safety rate for driving remains the visual and hot issue. It is believed that lowering legal driving age is able to reduce the significantly amount of terrible road incidents. However, this way can not pertain completely the problem from my own view.
There is a large number of traffic accidents caused by youngsters. At their verge age, they haven't fully understand and aware of the serious consequences of their actions. They are not ready to be apart of driving. Even though, having driving license at young age would raise their responsibility and awareness, there is no available heavy law to deal with those who violate at their age. As the current state, they drive with careless manner and tend to ignore the rules. This suggestion gains a limit extend effect.
In order to upgrade the safety, more regulations ought to be imposed. First, heavier fine and longer serving sentence for traffic vindication. For instance, driving motorbikes without helmets fine should up to 200 dollar to 600 dollar. In addition, operating road safety rules seminar at school frequently propagandize it to students. Lastly, Government should public the constant violators. Those suggestions will enhance the firm rules.
In conclusion, combination of the above suggestions is necessary to let driving more safety.
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- Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age, for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- In conclusion, I believe that introducing stricter regulations for driving offences is a much better measure to increase road safety in comparison with increasing the minimum driving age. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25821596244 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74102825779 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.69014084507 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6957582927 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3125 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416252566569 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518734935258 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921860562919 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693653721147 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.34 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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