Do you agree or disagree with this idea? Technology decrease children creativity. Give your reasons.
As the world becomes increasingly civilized , people start to concentrate on their interests, find out information about their proficiencies. Plenty things was changed in the last few decades. many people deem that nowadays technology deplete young people's creativeness, on the other hand most of them believes that technology enhances children's abilities. Although not surprisingly, number of controversies over the issue is overwhelming , actually, I concur with huan beings who think that technology has many benefits in evolved society. I will delve into the most outstanding reasons in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, the first important point to be mentioned is that twenty first century is era of technology. In this day ang age, all professions are related to computer science, due to this fact each individual should follow the flow. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. I have my two brothers , one of them really interested in data science , however other keen on business. And each of them follow their own interests. Consequently, my brother whos interest was related to technology , now has well-paid job in United States of America, but second brother is living in Bishkek with mini- business. For this reason , I can surely say that in this century if person know technology as well , he or sha can easily find job.
Another equally vital reason which should be highlighted here is that technology is the best way to implement your dreams. For instance if child really interested in robotics, but does not have opportunities technology is the best way to achieve these goals. By doing many researches , by participating in various fair related to robotics he can gain great experience, which he can use in his future career.
Admittedly, technology to ome extent , has it's undeniable detriment. No one coul omit the fact that in this century children are so lazy. Since nowadays everything is ready their parents provide them with everything the want, youth used to ready things. however, compared to it's pros, which would be good to people's career and knowledge, it's cons become pale.
In light of all aforementioned reasons it is explicitly obvious that technology evolves children's capabilities, which will hwlp them in career.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.进入练习 81
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: “It is more important for students to study art and literature than it is to study math and science.” Provide reasons and examples to support your opinion. 73
- Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports Other believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to sch 78
- TPO-44 - Integrated Writing TaskIn 1957 a European silver coin dating to the eleventh century was discovered at a Native American archaeological site in the state of Maine in the United States. Many people believed the coin had been originally brought to 71
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...the world becomes increasingly civilized , people start to concentrate on their in...
^^
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
...gs was changed in the last few decades. many people deem that nowadays technology de...
^^^^
Line 1, column 439, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...roversies over the issue is overwhelming , actually, I concur with huan beings who...
^^
Line 1, column 503, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...th huan beings who think that technology has many benefits in evolved society. I ...
^^
Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-first
...important point to be mentioned is that twenty first century is era of technology. In this d...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...sonal experience. I have my two brothers , one of them really interested in data s...
^^
Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...f them really interested in data science , however other keen on business. And eac...
^^
Line 3, column 520, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: who's
...own interests. Consequently, my brother whos interest was related to technology , no...
^^^^
Line 3, column 559, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... whos interest was related to technology , now has well-paid job in United States ...
^^
Line 3, column 689, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...kek with mini- business. For this reason , I can surely say that in this century i...
^^
Line 3, column 763, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...entury if person know technology as well , he or sha can easily find job. Anoth...
^^
Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ve these goals. By doing many researches , by participating in various fair relate...
^^
Line 7, column 37, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... Admittedly, technology to ome extent , has its undeniable detriment. No one co...
^^
Line 7, column 255, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...g the want, youth used to ready things. however, compared to its pros, which would be g...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, first, however, if, really, second, so, well, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21866666667 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94866653449 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5606989045 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.85 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156523754532 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424827544349 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339605157639 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823176011728 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0106633429332 0.0645574589148 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.