Summarize the point made in the lecture ,being to sure how it oppose the specific points made in the reading passage
Smart cars
According to the lecture the professor not really feels that the smart car technology will provide more benefits in accident problem, traffic problem and cost driving . According to her opinion it will benefical for us. She refute all the advantages which are mentioned in the passage.
Firstly,According to the reading passage the smart cars are very usefull to reduce the number of accidents on the highway.Smart Cara are well designed with highly sesetive senor which cntoel the breaks and collision. Even though smart car which highly sensor it causes the accidents if it fail occosstinally. According to the professor this sitution cause the cars more pack together lead to cause an accident. So it is little resonable to believe that smar car reduce the accidents.
Secondly,According to the reading ,it will solve the traffic problem on the highway. Smart cars provide computer contoller which can control the cars on highway and speed of the car. The professor says that,it is true that smart car increase the speed of the car ,will cause the increase in the people to drive. More car on higway will cause the congetion problem.
Lastly,the passage mentioned that smart cars reduce the cost of driving. However in reality the repair cost of smart car is much more high than the cost of regular car repair. Because the smart cars have expansive sensor and advance technology which so expensive than brakea and tires.
Finally, the professor contradict all the benefits which are mentioned in the passage.
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the professor not really feels that
the professor does not really feel that
Sentence: According to her opinion it will benefical for us.
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Suggestion: Refer to will and benefical
Sentence: She refute all the advantages which are mentioned in the passage.
Description: The fragment She refute all is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace refute with verb, past tense
Sentence: According to the professor this sitution cause the cars more pack together lead to cause an accident.
Description: The fragment sitution cause the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace cause with verb, past tense
Sentence: The professor says that,it is true that smart car increase the speed of the car ,will cause the increase in the people to drive.
Description: The fragment car increase the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace increase with verb, past tense
Sentence: Finally, the professor contradict all the benefits which are mentioned in the passage.
Description: The fragment professor contradict all is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace contradict with verb, past tense
Sentence: According to her opinion it will benefical for us.
Error: benefical Suggestion: beneficial
Sentence: Firstly,According to the reading passage the smart cars are very usefull to reduce the number of accidents on the highway.Smart Cara are well designed with highly sesetive senor which cntoel the breaks and collision.
Error: usefull Suggestion: useful
Error: cntoel Suggestion: inter
Error: sesetive Suggestion: restive
Sentence: Even though smart car which highly sensor it causes the accidents if it fail occosstinally.
Error: occosstinally Suggestion: occasionally
Sentence: According to the professor this sitution cause the cars more pack together lead to cause an accident.
Error: sitution Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: So it is little resonable to believe that smar car reduce the accidents.
Error: resonable Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: smar Suggestion: star
Sentence: Smart cars provide computer contoller which can control the cars on highway and speed of the car.
Error: contoller Suggestion: controller
Sentence: More car on higway will cause the congetion problem.
Error: higway Suggestion: highway
Error: congetion Suggestion: condition
Sentence: Because the smart cars have expansive sensor and advance technology which so expensive than brakea and tires.
Error: brakea Suggestion: brake
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 12 2
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4
The correct pattern:
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para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 18 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 12 2
No. of Sentences: 16 12
No. of Words: 256 250
No. of Characters: 1243 1200
No. of Different Words: 113 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.855 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.321 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 91 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 70 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.738 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.625 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.383 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.637 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.117 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4