TPO 24
Both the article and lecturer discusses the tissues which have been found in a dinasour's leg bone, recently. The text contends that the scientists have found some materials seem to be remains of blood vessels, red blood cells and collagen matrix. The professor refutes all of the findings.
Firstly, the lecturer avers that the soft tissue inside the bone is not necessarily blood. He states when an organism dies bacteria collonize there. So, they they live behind the traces of organism. However, the essay claims the scientists found the presence of a soft, flexible organic substance inside the channels in the bone which may represent the remains of actual blood vessels.
Moreover, the professor declaration about the iron field surface is that some other animal in same place have been found with these spheres which do not have any blood. As a result, these cells maybe have a different origin. On the other hand, the text states the presence of these spheres may be originated from red blood cells. plus, these spheres have dark red centers and are in the approximate size of red blood cells.
Finally, the lecturer expresses that collage cannot last for a long time. Therefore, their existance in the bone contradicts with their life span. As a probable explanation they may not come from T-rex and they may source from hands of the scientists. Conversly, the article says scientists have found collagen in T-rex bones.
- TPO 54 3
- TPO 51Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- TPO 21 3
- TPO 54: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 63
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... collagen matrix. The professor refutes all of the findings. Firstly, the lecturer av...
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Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...when an organism dies bacteria collonize there. So, they they live behind the tra...
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Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: they
...ism dies bacteria collonize there. So, they they live behind the traces of organism. How...
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Line 9, column 331, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Plus
...may be originated from red blood cells. plus, these spheres have dark red centers an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 239.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05857740586 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42269169704 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 145.348785872 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548117154812 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 419.366225166 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8839006619 49.2860985944 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6 110.228320801 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 21.698381199 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06452816374 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.27373068433 281% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376026247692 0.272083759551 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115722965809 0.0996497079465 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10031108706 0.0662205650399 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219233111951 0.162205337803 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699912225841 0.0443174109184 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.3589403974 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.8541721854 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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