The line graph below changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975to 2000.
The line graph gives information about the changes in the amount and type of junk food consumption by Australia teenagers from different years between 1975to2000.the data have begun generated in several times eaten per year.
Overall,it can seen that,the packed food divided three types;pizza,fish and chips as well as hamburgers.hamburgers consumption was dramatically raised rather than others fatty food.
In case of pizza,It is crystal clear that,in 1995,pizza consumed by Australian teens was only less than several times.however,next year pizza slightly riseup.in mid of 1990-95 this kind pro processed food was stable in above renumber of times.
In addition,fish and chips in first year more consumed as compared to other junk food items .while,In 1980year, this food significantly decreased. In last annualised year,fish and chips consumption some time was only 40.
Paradoxically,in case of hamburgers was less than several times consumption.even though,next year hamburger dramatically rose-pink year1985.in 1990year,this reprocessing good sharply increment and consumed several times was highest (100).
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, well, while, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.12578616352 4.92477711251 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.56776216445 2.65546596893 134% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691823899371 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9360770599 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.333333333 112.824112599 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156467063973 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808522279398 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818178576588 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915884364981 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08107863478 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.2329268293 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 61.2550243902 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.57 11.4140731707 163% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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