People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
It is an age old saying that Man is a social animal. human beings tend to be surrounded in company of each other. Not many people like to be aloof and alone. As we come in contact of other individuals, we tend to learn new things good and bad. Every day, every minute there is some kind of human interaction that occurs in a normal person's life as a result there is a direct or indirect impact on the individual. These interactions and experiences teach an individual multiple thing which gets into the subconscious mind and plays an important role in an individual's behavioral development as well as in overall personality development.
To elaborate further consider the kids who are raised in a family of military personnel, it is noted that those kids are more disciplined and active compared to kids who are raised in a civilian family. This difference is mainly due to the environment in which the kids are raised. What the kids see they learn and that becomes part of the personality and hence drives the behavior.
Similarly, the way in which a person respond to a situation is mostly driven by the experience the person might have had in the past or might have learnt from someone close in a similar situation. Very often we see that a kid reacts pretty much in the same way as the parent react when exposed to a similar situation. This again is something which comes naturally to the kid as part of kid's constant interaction with his parents. Also, when we consider a larger group of individual there also, we observe similar trait where in people from same society have similar behavior or reaction to a situation.
One may argue that behavior is a personal trait and it cannot be driven by external factors. Such an argument can be negated by considering an example of a poor individual. When given a penny or a dollar the reaction and action of that beggar will be totally different when compared to someone who is well off. This difference in reaction and action is only because of difference in individual’s circumstance and surrounding.
To conclude, the behavior of an individual is very much dependent on external factors that surround the individual or the factors to which the individual is exposed to. Many such factors contribute in the development of a reaction (from the individual) to a situation there by impacting the behavior of the person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Human
...old saying that Man is a social animal. human beings tend to be surrounded in company...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...ous mind and plays an important role in an individuals behavioral development as well as in ov...
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... as in overall personality development. To elaborate further consider the kids w...
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...sonality and hence drives the behavior. Similarly, the way in which a person res...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, similarly, so, well, kind of, as a result, as well as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 413.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79661016949 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83149318928 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474576271186 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8523366874 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.263157895 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7368421053 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.053799687356 0.243740707755 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0193321811664 0.0831039109588 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026822708334 0.0758088955206 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0319225723012 0.150359130593 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0109672623179 0.0667264976115 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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