In twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use that are today.
From the dawn of the human era, traveling and transportation was an important aspect of human civilization. With the development of technology we came from animal to carts to modern cars to fulfill our transportation requirements. Definitely our ancestors would never imagine to travel at speeds of today. In this era cars are the main method people use to travel. Many believe that with ever increasing population, number of car will also be increased. But my view is opposite and I will explain this under three reasons in following essay.
To begin with, in twenty years it can be expected to have more advanced and developed public transportation methods. Therefore people will use them for traveling. Moreover, current research interests among motor industry shows that they invest more money to find economical ways of public transportation. Governments also encourage citizens to use public transportation. For example, in my country Sri Lanka, government has doubled the number of trains within past ten years. This is mostly to reduce the high traffic congestion it the capital. This trend is not unique to Sri Lanka, governments around the world now promote public transportation. Therefore in future we will see reduction of privately own vehicles, especially cars.
Secondly, In future cars will be replaced by bicycles. This can expect as current environmental problems will force people to replace their cars from environment friendly vehicles. For instance, statistics shows that in countries like Norway, number of bicycle has increased significantly within past decade. In contrast number of cars shows some reduction. As they explains this is mostly due to awareness programs held by organizations. There is also another fact to replace cars by bicycles, that is cycling helps to make people healthier. Due to these multiple advantages in future we will see fewer cars and more bicycles.
Last but not least, with the development of technology, need for travel is reducing day by day. For example internet base platforms like Amazon allows you to order goods online and they use drones to deliver those items to your home. In future, there will be more advances in robotics and further reduces the need for travel. Moreover, in future, most of the jobs will able to do from home. Therefore there will be no need to buy a cars. Sometimes we will cars only from museums.
In conclusion, with the development of public transportation, rise of bicycle usage dues to awareness of environmental issues and health issues we will see reduction of car population. Furthermore, with the advancement of technology, there will be a reduction of need for travel, which will result in overall reduction in vehicles, especially private vehicles like cars.
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 5.04856512141 416% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 30.3222958057 270% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 23.0 5.01324503311 459% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2330.0 1373.03311258 170% => OK
No of words: 445.0 270.72406181 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23595505618 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.04702891845 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95081936629 2.5805825403 114% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 145.348785872 162% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52808988764 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 731.7 419.366225166 174% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 2.5761589404 543% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 13.0662251656 222% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1325677298 49.2860985944 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3448275862 110.228320801 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3448275862 21.698381199 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.79310344828 7.06452816374 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 4.33554083885 369% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.27373068433 281% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317371205926 0.272083759551 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810281520515 0.0996497079465 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663106329562 0.0662205650399 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165836984329 0.162205337803 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252433257817 0.0443174109184 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 63.6247240618 181% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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