The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table provides the information of underground railways station about opened date, length of route and passanger per year (in millions) in London, paris, Tokyo, washington, Kyoto, and Los Angeles. Overall, it can be seen that the older the station the length of the constructed route is more except for kyoto and travelling passenger per year is not uniform throughout the given period.
First of all, the highest number of passenger travel is 1927 million per year in Tokyo, the route is 155 kilometers long and was constructed in year 1927. In contrast the least number of travelling passanger is 45 millions in Kotyo, the station was built in 1981 and is only 11 kilometers long. Looking more closely at the table the construction of the underground station at six cities was done in large interval. Moreover, there is drastic difference in the number of passengers of different cities.
To sum up, there are three different <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">categories</span> low, medium and high and two city lies in each categories. length of route is small in Kyoto, and Llos Angeles and less number of passengers are traveling and after that,London and , washington in these two cities both number of passanger travel in a year. And at last paris and Tokyo the number of passenger is highest and second highest.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The table provides the information of underground railways station about opene...
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Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of all, the highest number of passenger travel is 1927 million per year in Tokyo...
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Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...ng and was constructed in year 1927. In contrast the least number of travelling passange...
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Line 9, column 159, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Length
...h and two city lies in each categories. length of route is small in Kyoto, and Llos An...
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Line 9, column 269, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , London
... passengers are traveling and after that,London and , washington in these two cities b...
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Line 9, column 280, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... are traveling and after that,London and , washington in these two cities both nu...
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Line 9, column 282, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re traveling and after that,London and , washington in these two cities both numb...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, moreover, second, except for, in contrast, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11872146119 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40095696304 2.65546596893 128% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534246575342 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0634441449 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.555555556 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 5.23603664747 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0650850830257 0.215688989381 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0315902624126 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05357635956 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0488674748868 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402757713059 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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