There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher.
What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem?
global warming is a major concern now a days, as temperature is rising glaciers are melting, earth become hotter, and many adverse effects are increasing rapidly. this adverse changes will effect the whole food chain, plant animals, organism, and human beings suffers a lot of problems due to higher global temperature. it is noticed that the reason for increasing global temperature is man-made activities.
pollution in air, water and soil is reach to its peak. many factories, industies and power-plants dispose tons of there waste in sea, river, and ocean, these waste contains a lot of toxic substance. wastes are eaten by the water living animals and organism, and this is how these waste enters in the food chain. Some of the wastes are directly dispose into the open land and area, the toxic contains in waste reduces the fertility of the soil, many organism that are helpful for farming become dead due to chemical substance.
Moreove, pollution of air is also increasing day by day due to buring of fuel in vehichles and engines. As we all know than plant take carbon-di-oxide and release oxygen with the help of photosynthesis process. But as population of the world is increasing the forests are cutting rapidly and less amoun of oxyger is relasing in the atmosphere and the carbon-di-oxide concentaration is increasing, this is the major reason of global warming.
To deal with global warming, we can take many steps. First plant as many trees as possible, second stop disposing of any waste in open field, or water. disposing of toxics substance and chemicals in proper way. Use renewable resourses like solar energy as it is free of cost and donot contain any harmful effects.
In conclusion, enviornment proble is neither caused by one person nor it is resolved by the one. it is the responsibility of whole world to deal it. it each individual is take small steps then definately this problem will become less in the future. so for this government has to make strict rule so that all the waste can be desposed in regulated rules
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, so, then, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94540229885 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73752108071 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545977011494 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.681454423 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6111111111 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180877950752 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537051497683 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684036918303 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945585581397 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803099984863 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.