The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given line chart illustrates the figures of the survey carried out in London about the number of underground station passengers in a day from 6:00 to 22:00.

In general, the graph has a unstable tendency during 16 hours of the survey. It reaches a peak at 400 passengers at 8:00 AM, following that is 16:00 PM.

According to the chart, at the beginning of the research, it start with 100 passengers at 6 : 00 AM. Then, there is an upward trend in the number of commuters in 2 following hours. It drops to below 200 passengers at 10:00. The data shows the unsteadiness during next 6 hours. There is a slight increase from 10:00 AM to 14:00 PM which is time for officer having a break lunch. Meanwhile, it bottoms out at 16:00 with just only 100 commuters. After 16:00, the chart tends to grow up again till 18:00, which means in this period of time, the vast majority of citizens moving home after study or work. The quantity of passengers have a fluctuated decrease to 22:00.

To sum up, the number of passengers who using the underground station reaches the highest position during the office going and office leaving in a day.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...0 to 22:00. In general, the graph has a unstable tendency during 16 hours of th...
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Line 5, column 522, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...p again till 18:00, which means in this period of time, the vast majority of citizens moving ...
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Line 5, column 574, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me, the vast majority of citizens moving home after study or work. The quantity o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, while, in general, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5931372549 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52906954084 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6634277389 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0833333333 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111257315482 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490144683293 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455291273029 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947845115135 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046691683327 0.0819641961636 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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