Some people think competitive sports, such as football, are valuable because they can gather people with different ages and cultures together. Some think competitive sports can cause problems because people are from different groups and countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is become controversial issue whether competitive sports bring people together from different background or causes menace among them. I will discuss both the views along with my opinion in the subsequent paragraphs.
On one hand, sports are beneficial for people from different walks of life and different cultures because these competitive games develop team spirit among players. When people of different culture and age play as a team then they are judged by their team and performance not by their background and they play with coöperation to defence their rivals, hence, it make relation stronger among players. Moreover, playing in a team with different culture's and age's people get more information about other ethics and morals and they learn how to respect their co-players.
One the other hand, playing competitive games, some people believe, can cause conflicts among people of different nations because during competition they develop the feeling of envy among other which can lead to quarrel among them. Furthermore, sometimes people from different nations and groups cannot develop team spirit among themselves and which results into misunderstandings and disputes between sportsmen. Hence there are some problems that can be occurred.
In my opinion, playing competitive games together is worthwhile if players play these games with coöperation and team spirit otherwise it can the major cause of disputation.
In conclusion, although playing competitive games together by players of different backgrounds can bring them together yet it also can be the root of many problems
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also, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55284552846 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80043538819 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532520325203 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7851257186 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.6 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388246155992 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169460706508 0.084324248473 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757139568838 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209260287165 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841997359049 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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