In today's competitive world, may families find it necessary for both the parents to go to work while some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel their lack of support because of their parents absence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Children feel lonely when both the parents are working and there is no one to take care of them or play with them. Nowadays it has become a necessity for mothers and fathers to work to bear the expenses of a family. There is a heated argument that, should both spouse work or only one of them. In this essay we will discuss how these scenarios will affect the upbringing of child, and see that one of the parent at home will have positive influence on child.
Firstly, in the world where we live now, in terms of inflation, expenses have gone too high. Rent of houses, groceries, cars, health care, education have gone beyond the reach of a middle class family. In order to give a child better future and provide them a good standard of living, it is essential that both the parents work. Next, if the mentality of any family is to have a lavish life, one parent working won't be sufficient to meet all the luxuries.
On the Other hand, while it is fine that both parents work to meet requirements of a family, this will have negative impact on child's development too, as there will be no one at home to take care care of children. For an instance, while parents are away, children tend to follow a wrong path such as getting addicted to drugs, watching too much television. These things will result in underdeveloped kids. In fact, families can hire baby sitters to look over their child when they are home away but no one can replace parents as caretakers. Moreover, none can support a child like mom and dads, as they share the same blood.
To summarize, it is essential to for both parents to work and win bread for their families but not on the expense of ignoring their offspring. In my opinion, there should be at least one parent at home to look after and monitor their kids, as they are the future any nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: care
...as there will be no one at home to take care care of children. For an instance, while par...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e can support a child like mom and dads, as they share the same blood. To su...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, while, at least, in fact, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47164179104 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31251787395 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528358208955 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9780053306 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8666666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242793783704 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858397638581 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691908924328 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163343511781 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501548125763 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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