Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women. What is your opinion?
In contemporary life, gender discrimination seems to be regarded as a controversial problem in society. While many people suppose that both genders are equal and they can pursue any job they passionate about, others argue that it is necessary for females to withdraw in certain occupations on account of their lack of physical condition and their characteristics. From my perspective, I appreciate the equality between males and females and strongly believe disapprove of gender discrimination in the workplace. This essay will discuss the adverse effects if women are not allowed to do certain jobs.
First and foremost, it is undeniable that both genders, albeit men or women, they also have a right to pursue their own career path as they are all human beings. To illustrate, if a man has such specific qualities as leadership, interpersonal skills or problem-solving skills, it is hard to say that women will not possess them. In this modern age, there are a number of outstanding role models who are considered as "weaker sides", but they extremely excel at their position: Hillary Clinton and Michelle Obama. Both of them constantly protest against gender discrimination and harassment at work and their touching stories seem to be prevalent throughout the world.
Moreover, advocates of this view believe that the withdrawal of women in certain jobs may lead to a lack of productivity. Today labor market is facing a shortage of workers. As a matter of course, only men will not meet a huge of tasks and, as a result, the revenue of this company may face a run-down in an unprecedented speed. Therefore, any country where have a tension of banning women from certain jobs should make sure that they can solve the labor-related problems and the detrimental effects on economic aspects: poverty or even crime.
In conclusion, I strongly support the view that there must not be gender discrimination existing in workplace because of the quality between males and females. Besides, what we need to do is speaking out and protesting against gender harassment in order to protect both genders.
- The charts below show the reason why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries Explain the main causes and effects of this problem and suggest some possible solutions 84
- In your opinion why is the circus still a popular form of entertainment in the modern electronic age Support your opinion with reasons and examples from your own knowledge and experience 56
- Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity.What are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity?What solutions can you suggest? 67
- Nowadays, children play less with others and this has an impact on their development.What are the reasons for this?Does it have a good or a bad effect on children 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16279069767 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04128679428 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587209302326 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.732994537 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.857142857 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26500163436 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796551590238 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675892149075 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144951950027 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715486332234 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.