Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Although some people are of the view that getting a degree is the key to get a competitive job, others believe that physical experience and attaining interpersonal skills is more useful. In my opinion, I think that studying university degree will offer far more prospects in the job market.
On the one hand, some people maintain that acquiring tertiary education guarantees a good place in the job market and I agree. University education opens up many competitive positions in the market to target from potential employers where employees get a market competitive salary besides getting other benefits. As an example, almost all the multinational firms offer jobs to no less than university graduates for key positions in their organisations. Another point to consider is that higher education inhibits people with the relevant knowledge and information of their domain before entering into market place. This puts them in a better position to serve the society using their knowledge and expertise. For instance, a degree in engineering would enable an individual to build dams and infrastructure projects for the welfare of community.
On the other hand, other people advocate that getting hands-on experience and communication skills is more beneficial. It is owing to the fact that experts who have the experience know the whole dynamics of the processes and can operate in their areas skillfully. In other words, a turbine engineer in a power plant needs to have relevant experience op operating a turbine before qualifying for this post. Other than experience, developing soft skills is also considered necessary to grow professionally. More often than not, skilled individuals need to coordinate with their line staff and having the skills of negotiation, persuasiveness and effective communication will prove to be vital in most of the cases.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinions, I am of the view that pursuing a university degree in any domain is vital to target key positions in the job market.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, so, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28923076923 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00594440653 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541538461538 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7845061699 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.785714286 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32486104337 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11503936382 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108224469778 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19493290974 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953541238896 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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